As you are running and running, you know that there are people behind you that want to kill you. Your best friend is helping you to get out of this really old bank. As you make your way to you car there is a person that is going to fight you. So your friends takes him out and you get into the car. The first punch knocks out the other person and your best friends gets into the car. Right when he opens the door gun shots go off. They miss you and your friend. Right after that one man shoots the last shot your friend goes after him to kill him. He had one shot left. Bang right into the head. When he falls you hop into the drivers seat and drives. You drive down the high way going 90 miles an hour. You call 911. When they pick up, they say, “Hello this is 911, what is your emergency?”
You say, “I am the president's son and my best friend helped me get out of this bank and he got shot! What should I do?”
The operator said, “Come to the station and we will help you.”
You say, “Thank you” then you hang up. Still speeding down the high way you start to hear a police car. You pull over and stop the car. The officer steps out and asks you to step out of the car. He asks you some questions and then he puts you in his car. Then you see your best friend in the car. You say, “But…But I thought you were dead!”
To Be continued
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I have to admit, I'm not following this plot. There are too many pieces to the puzzle: President's son? Why are you running from the bank? Did the friend get shot, or what? I suggest revising to create a cleaner, more logical version.
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