My Real Bed Room

Ring, Ring, Ring your alarm goes off at 11 P.M. Then you hit the button and ZOOM. You go 100 miles an hour on you red and black bed over an Olympic size pool and stop right in front of your closet‼! Your closet has all the clothes you want to have. It even has an elevator. Your butler gives you a hot cocoa and a plate of pancakes. Before you head into your closet you pick up your phone and walk in. When you get into your closet you have a robot take off your clothes so you can take a shower. You get into your enjoyable and hot shower. Your favored soap is right there where you are. When you get out of the shower your clothes are right there. You dry off and put your gray sweat pants and your black tank top. When you get out of your closet you are wondering what to do. So you look at your phone and see that your friend text you to see if you wanted to hang out. That’s where it all started to go.

My friend comes over to my house to hang out and bowl a few games. The bowling ale is right next to my bed room. After we bowled we go to the game room. That is on the other side of my room. Waiting for the game to load me ask my friend “what do you want to do after this?”

He says “let’s go and get a tan in the tanning room. We only need to go a few feet into the next room”

Then I said, “Ok let’s go.”

After I got out of the tanning room it was 10 P.M. and I was tired. So I told my friend to sleep over at my house to pull an all nighters. So that’s what he did. When it was the morning we were tired for the whole day. When we came down from my room I got some food for me. It was French toast and eggs with buttered toast on the side. I and my friend have like 4 plates of it. Being an only chilled means I really get what ever I want to have. As long as my parents let me.

It is about 4 P.M. and my friend needs to go home because his mom is making him go. Now I am all lonely and my mom and dad are making me money. All of a sudden I hear a really big bang of glass and gun shots go off. I try to call the police but the phone lines are dead so I can’t call them. So I run up into my room and go to my paint ball, air soft and amino room. Now I have 30 thousands paint balls, 40 thousand air soft bb’s and a remote control tank so I can go and shoot people. Now I go to down stairs into a spot where they wont be able to hit me from. Then I hear a noise of people coming down the hall way. They are talking about stealing all the money these people have. We just need to get into the safe. When I know in my mine that they are not going to break the lock that is on it. It is the longest password in the world.

Then the guard in the left side is saying “There is some one that knows that code that is in the house.”

The guard on the ride said “the parents are gone and they have one kid that we heard no noise from him”

I know in my mine that they will never find me…

To be continued

The Tall Tale Heart

Your mind is jumping all around your sweating head. Your eyes are blood shot. You can’t tell them at all. Then suddenly it all comes out in one big sentence. I KILLED THE OLD MAN! You just don’t know why it came out. That is what happened to the narrator of the story of "The Tall Tail Heart". The narrator is not close to being reliable because he is crazy from the symbol of the old man's eye.

The narrator of the story the tall tail heart is just plan crazy. He is so crazy that he made this evil plot to kill the old man. He could of just asked him to put something over his eye. That is what made him crazy but he goes and kills him. That week he treats him the best since it is the last week he is going to be alive.

The reason why the narrator killed the old man is his evil eye that always looks at him. The symbols in the story are the police, the evil eye and the old man. The police stand for the good side for the narrator to go to after he kill the other symbols. The old man and the evil eye. The old man stands for Death or the dark side. Whenever the narrator saw the old man. He just gets a really cold burst of blood. The old man that dies from the narrator is a symbol of the good side or the light side.

Being the narrator of the tall tail heart was scary because Edger Allen Poe was a dark man who put every scary word in his story to describe the crazy narrator and the old man.